Loving You (Part 1)

by Italian Stallion   Jan 20, 2007


Loving you
Was a dream come true.
I gave you my heart,
And hoped we would never part.

From the moment I met you,
I knew it was true.
And that your love for me,
Would never flee.

And as the days became weeks
And the weeks turned to months
My love for you began to grow
And even started to show

I always wore the color red,
Because I knew ahead;
That you would say,
You liked my display.

I wrote you love poems,
Hoping you would love them;
Like the way you loved me,
Wishing you not to flee.

You're the only one,
You're in everyone I see.
You're the one I trust,
You're the one I want to touch.

When I close my eyes it's you I see,
And nothing can compare
For the way you care;
Not just for me, but others as well.

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 9 years ago

    by Danielle

    The rhyme seemed a bit forced in this poem. However, the emotion was there 100%. When I read this poem I could see and feel the emotion put into it. I don't know what part 2 sounds like or even if there is a part 2...but it almost seems like part 2 would have a sad ending. Anyways! Loved this poem =-]

  • 10 years ago

    by Randy East

    Excellent poem my friend. Im a big fan of the way you rhyme. I know there are tons of poem styles but to me the best one's are the ones that rhyme and stay true to a grand purpose or point. You wright your thoughts exceptionally well.

    Randy East

  • 10 years ago

    by xx

    That was...wonderful. :D I don't mean to be a bother, but some of the rhymes seemed a bit...forced. However, it was still an excellent piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by noha

    Waw, nice one i realy enjoy reading it, keep it up

  • This was a great porm.The emotion you put into it was sincere and heart felt.The flow was a little off but that's no biggie.I'm a sucker for love poems so this one was really good.5/5

    <3Amber