Comments : Kiss on the Cheek

  • 12 years ago

    by Denysia

    Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Isabelle

    Oh my god. That was so dark and deep. I loved it. It is amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by angelina

    Really really good ... i enjoy this one ... every word keeps me reading faster wanting to know what is next ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Rona

    Very dark and interesting! I like the imagery and the structure! Well done! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cooper

    Simple, and complex in it's own unique way. It was well written, and intriguing. Beautiful imagery.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    I love your rhyming and the ending of your poem makes it really set the mood, I'll be reading more of your work :) xox sam

  • 12 years ago

    by xSpiritedShadowx

    Oh this is a beautiful and haunting write that leaves me wishing for more. Wonderful, wonderful job dear poetess.

  • 12 years ago

    by Arabella

    Wow... this is totally hott. another g8 poem. gud job!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Cherise

    I really enjoyed this poem. i can't wait to read some more of your work :)

    -resse

  • 12 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    And your 13? Dang! You are like an amazing poet. I just could feel the pain and hurt in this poem. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Very deep, I like it. Young people these days man... so much more in touch with their emotions than in my day. Great work! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written. The flow as well as the structure were both good. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ohh very eerie and dark. But wonderful write. Good job, the flow was great, and the poem itself was amazing. Great job and keep it up. :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Especially liked

    Heart tears in two
    Pain slicing through
    Screaming is heard
    But never say a word

    really fine work 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Darien

    Very nicely done, it was short and meaningful. It seemed like lines that lacked detail, but it was still good, there was still a poetic touch to the way this was written. Afterall poetry is written with a creative mind, and thrives on uniqueness.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow nice poem reminds me of life, thats what i like about poems but thats my point of view not making that differance to the world, wright on and maybe the differance will come your way.

  • 12 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Wow this is so great! so well written and the verses all flow so well. keep writing =)

  • 12 years ago

    by supratim

    Your poem posses an inexhaustible fund of feelings..........

    great job!!!!

    god bless

  • 12 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ Cool +.+

  • 12 years ago

    by andrea

    This is so good i love it