Tarnished

I really like this. It's very unique and short but to the point. I think you would be excellent at writing some styled poetry, shorter styles because you have a way of writing with such meaningful strong words. This is really great, I can't find anything wrong with it.

I'd also just like to thank you for your comment on my poem. I appreciate that there was critique, I want to improve, and it helps, so thanks. =]

5/5 for this.

Tammie

I really liked this work of yours and plan to read more of your works. bravo!!

This poem is great. It explains exactly what love and life can be. Atleast that is what I got out of it, that is how it makes me feel.