Comments : I am Sorry

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    There are a couple grammatical errors, but they are not too damaging to this piece. Well thought out, and intruiging. It has a flow that captivates the reader and adds emphasis. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I dont think the grammer errors matter when its such a good poem!!!
    very good!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very nice sentiments in this piece. I like the overall feel of it....romantic and apologetic.

    I am sorry my angel,
    I am confessing my guilt tonight.
    With a promise,
    To make every second of your life
    Bright.

    The last verse is my favorite. Such heartfelt emotion...beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Esp. love the last few lines, great work. PLEASE comment as much of my stuff as you can thnxs

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I swear this would make me cry. I don't even know what to say. I'm speechless. This was just amazing. Beautiful write! I love it!!! 5/5!!

    -` Liz

  • Hi
    first of all i don't see any gramer mistakes, and even if there is i don't think its such a big issue to how good one can write, and this poem as simple and sweet as it is comes from a heart that feels each word very deeply down and probebly mean alot to him as well as idea behind this poem.
    i truely loved it, acctually i love every single one of your poems, becaues when you write it, you give it this air of yourself that no matter how much one tries not to care, but as iam sure alot of your readers are , get very lost in it...
    great job,,,,and trust me she is lucky, and alot of girl iam pretty sure are jelous of her.lool..
    looking forward to more poem by the favorite poet of all time

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw I love this poem so much. I wish a guy would say that to me lol. Anyway I think it's very well written and it definitley gets to you.

    cella

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    I really liked this one. well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    A nother beautiful poem. I loved it and I know how it feels. Keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Ooo i love that one, great job of course!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwwww this is amazing and beautiful!!
    Wonderful useage of words and great flow of the poem. The rhythem was great! Keep up the great work!
    God Bless 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is really good. Goran I loved the emotion in it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i felt like tearing. that is so sweet, goran. keep up the awesome skill you have. the poems touch me. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwwww........and dude!! didnt u say a while back tht u werent goin to write anymore...u lie!! lol and by lookin at ur awards ur famous!ur lik a celeberty! well another awsomer poem by u..i can relate cuz im gettin over someone......a 5/5 for me

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem was absolutely beautiful...it almost took my breath away and made me sad and wistful. Excellent work!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Beautiful... i love the style of your writing!! I gave you a 5/5 and i def plan on reading more of you work :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Don't know what you did to have to say sorry... but if i was her, i'd be all over you if i saw that... jkjk
    seriously though, this is beautiful, these are some things i wished were said to me... dude, this poem almost made me cry!! great job!!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    I totally agree with fetusboy.

  • 17 years ago

    by StormyStar

    So touching. i love it. i love reading your workk..

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Beautiful poem!!