What he did

by Liz Lawson   Jan 22, 2007


Drowning with no water
bleeding with no sore
no one here to save me
battered to the core
a puzzle of missing pieces
of her and him
and how he left
my life means nothing to me
heart just seems to ache
because even just thinking of him
causes it to break

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...thats such a sad poem but you did an excellent job....i enjoyed reading that keep it up sweetie

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Yeah this is very good, it didnt seem forced at all very good flow and emotive, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Im in kinda the sitch you wrote. Its nice and depressing 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine

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