How I Feel Without You

by Curry   Jan 23, 2007


I feel like a picture with a broken frame,
I feel like a perfect shirt with a million stains.
The reason I feel this way,
I have you to blame,
Youve made me feel so much pain.
I'll never forget the day you said good-bye,
I felt like i just been stabbed in my heart with a knife.
I felt like I wanted to die,
I thought I'd never be able to live a happy life.
Without you I feel like I have nothing,
I feel there's nothing left of me.
I feel like an angel with a broken wing,
Sometimes I even feel like I cant see.
It's gonna be hard to live without you,
But hopefully I'll make it through.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    The metaphors and similies, complement the
    poem so well. It's an amazing piece
    reflecting upon the message. I like how
    it is written. Great Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Awwww. i dont really no how to compliment the poem, but AWWW/

    pisture-i think you meant picture.

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I like the metaphors you used in this piece, and the way you put it all together. Great job. I particularly liked these lines

    "I feel there's nothing left of me.
    I feel like an angel with a broken wing,"

    Overall great job on this piece. Best wishes and blessed be. *Athame* 5/5

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