Pencil

by Romancing the Darker Side   Jan 24, 2007


It is round,
yellow,
sharp.
She lowers it to the paper
to express her pain.
It is now dull.
She feels like the pencil,
in a way,
because so many people use her,
abuse her,
so she sharpens herself up,
and waits to disappear
into an endless trail of writing,
fighting,
and ultimately life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow i never thought of a pencil lke that before great use of words keep writing
    laura-

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so sad.
    i just love the way you have written this poem
    brought tears to my eyes
    best wishes
    and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    I loved it,
    great comparision.
    who ever thought you
    could be like a pencil.
    Amazing.

    -Amberinaa*
    xoxox

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The flow was off
    I felt like it needed more structure
    the emotion was almost there
    the idea was really good
    loved the metaphors
    nice work
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Thank you!

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