A little present

by The Girl From Yesterday   Jan 24, 2007


The moon cast shadows o'er the land,
The hour of eleven was at hand,
A young girl sat on a lone park bench,
Heartbreaking sobs causing her body to wrench.

A few days ago she made a mistake,
One that would soon her life to take,
No one knew the cause of her sorrow,
She knew she might not see tomorrow.

Her hand hastily swiped at her eye,
But even still she continued to cry,
The man had seemed so gentle so...clean,
But now she knew that the world was mean.

She was only a girl, and a young one at that,
But she fell for the man as he tipped his hat,
He said that he loved her and she believed it true,
If you had heard him, you would have too.

Two days ago she received in the mail,
A simple poem which she now held,
"The heart, the diamond, the club, the spade,
Welcome to the world of AIDS"

"The heart, the diamond, the club, the spade" relates to an ordinary stack of playing cards, but unlike life, it is a game. But it also holds a deeper meaning. The heart stands for what is pushed aside when you have lust for someone, the diamond stands for greed. The club is a bit harder to describe, but it stands for power. Humans have dominated all species on this earth, and have even wrongly dominated other human beings. The spade stands for the expression " Digging your own grave" because with lust, greed, and power, there is no room for love, and without love, there is no life.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Joshua Reimer

    It was a sad poem but it was great and expresses feeling through its every word and i love how you explained the deeper meaning behind the cards 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    You are REALLY talented! WOW. AIDS? The last stanzas in all your poem make me want to cry!!! Is this real? Are all your poems real? WOW God, I hope not. 5/5 easy... just...wow. *tear*

  • 17 years ago

    by jamie lynn

    Wow this poem is deep keep wrighting 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natasha

    Wow that is a great poem but really sad

  • 17 years ago

    by lost

    Wow that is an awesome poem. i like it SOO much. 5/5. i wish i could write like you!!!!!