Comments : Imagination

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    That's such a beautiful inspirational poem! Keep up the wonderful work.
    Your use of words were really wonderful
    God Bless 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Faceless Mirror

    The use of words were good so was the flow! :-) I aslo liked the repeating of the "Use it to"-part in the beginning of every stanza.

    Keep up the good work.

    -Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mm that was nice.. i enjoyed that one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    REally cute poem. i enjoyed reading it very much. it flowed very well. it was like a cool rhythm. i really liked it. the only thing/line i didnt like was this one;
    That daydream we all yearn
    it doesnt seem to work with the line above it. it doesnt seem to make much sense as it is., i mean. i know what you're getting at. but its not right..

    overall though, great job. xx3

    Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The words you used were magnifico! lol. chem i have found can be boring at certain times, well nearly all the time.

    i know wat you mean. 5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This is one of those poems that if you don't already know the title, it will leave you in suspense as to the meaning until the very last line. In which case you'll want to go back and read it again to clarify your understanding - it's a clever tool.
    I agree, and think all those uses of the imagination are well portrayed.
    I seem to use mine for what's said in the fourth stanza - where do you think my poetry comes from? And it seems yours does too. It seems you had a productive chem class, and you got something great out of it.
    The rhyme though on the third stanza is forced...I say that because in spoken English it would be "and truly fall in love," rather than what is said in your poem.
    That's it, that's all I can say.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww I really enjoyed this poem. I think imagination is a wonderful thing. You did and excellent job writting this. The flow was really good. I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    Neat! this was really well written :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Wow , you need to be bored more often with writes like this. Very creative and nicely worded , Great poem!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    U seem like u write better when ur bored, but maybe thats just me i loved this poem ur a great writer keep it up 5/5