Blank emptiness

by Lost & Delirious   Jan 28, 2007


The naked stare kisses blank emptiness,
Tired breathing keeps her alive,
Not wanting to talk about the unexplained,
She drifts away to her place.
The lonely silent sleep she loves,
No one's there, no one's there.
She's left alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, short but truly powerful! Every line is great, and complete impression for the piece is- simply breath- taking.
    Well done, 5/5 from me!
    Keep up

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The flow of this was wonderful, each word just seemed to glide into one another. Very sad emotions expressed, but a much enjoyable read.

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. what a beautiful choice of words.."The naked stare kisses blank emptiness," that line is amazing.. its so original and creative... this poem is short but still filled with a lost and lonely emotion that shines through strong.. keep it up :]P

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Alluring, well written, and creative. your word choice is excellent, and the emtion are deep and strong. You did an excellent job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Some-what off at the beginning, but a good peice. I liked your other one better. IT was still very alluring. kudos.

    -Liz-

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