A Dangerous Mind

by Midnight Sun   Jan 30, 2007


Living with you ... I've had to fight to survive
I'm existing with a mystery, in darkness you thrive

That stern look in those icy cold eyes
Make me feel as though me you despise

I go to sleep each night not knowing what you'll do
Will you let me live, or with me are you through?

Please don't stare at me in such a way
Tears are welling as you lead me astray

Please let me go, and let my skin have breath
Do you truly hate me...are you leading me to my death?

I would have never told you yes at all
If only I had known that your mind would fall

I never wanted to live in a way so blind
Who would have known of your dangerous mind

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I never wanted to live in a way so blind
    Who would have known of your dangerous mind"

    Wow hun.. i've missed your work and the sheer power your words hold..
    That last couplet was just.. wow!
    lol, you've made me lose my words.
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's unusual. I like it, but there are parts I think the flow's a bit off or just different from the rest. One typo I noticed was this

    I go to sleep each night no knowing what you'll do

    it's NOT not NO. I did like the thoughts in each stanza as if she's constantly in fear for her life. And the concluding sentence was good. A good way to end the poem. Nice job!
    Charisma*

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