Good work! very sad. i like the degree of innocence it has. it's a heartbreaker! keep your head up and your hand writting.

Aww hun wat a sad an emotional piec, i love the wording u have used an it flows perfectly throughout, got my 5 vote, keep writing an take care sarah x

I wish u were somebody i knew
after i gave you a big hug i would
go find this person that does'nt
desevre to be call dad and kick the sh*t out of him, thats how much
this poem affected me, and that is a sign of a good writer. 5/5 on the poem
5/5+++ on the emotions ur poem
cause thanks cy

Oh my goodness!!!! this is soooooooooo sooooooo sooooo sadd! =[ .....its really good..i love it!

Another 5/5 and keep up the good work.

Again another great poem... You really capture the imiage in this one and feel the pain i hope you didnt go threw this its terrible but i understand exactly how you feel...