I wish

by TiMe hEaLs aLL wOuNdS   Jan 31, 2007


I wish that day didn't even happen
i wish you were still here
i wish i hadn't drove that night
i wish your voice i can continue to hear

i miss you dearly
i miss you more each day
i miss your cute smile
that will never fade away

i wanna hold you again
i wanna see you once more
i wanna see the person
that knew me right down to the core

you were my source of happiness
and its hard to live without you
i can still hear your soft voice
responding i love you too

i wish that day didn't even happen
i wish you were still here
i wish i hadn't drove that night
i wish your voice i can continue to hear

i wrote this from someone Else's prospective...

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I like that poem, it is very sweet and so truthful, although I don't really like the chorus or the top and last paragraph only because it doesn't sound right...I think it can be reworded better and then it would have a better flow, but then it would really good,
    not that is isn't good already,
    but yeah just needs a little work,
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  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was wonderful =) You captured the pain, sorrow and anger perfectly ^_^ A perfect 5 although it deserves much more =)
    Rhea

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