I hope he frys in hell! You have done an amazing job putting this crime to verse. This poem is excellent!

Well done! Excellent portrayal of this heartbreaking crime. 5/5

This was really sad and a shame that things like this happen. Hope this wasn't real.

This poem is heartfelt. Tomorrow is the day of reckoning! Great job on this!

"As for the damage its already done.
For one moment of sickening fun"

This hit hard to me. I know what this feels like, that moment that seems to freeze in time, it is sick, but for some reason, he loved it. Lots of damage, but great write, I loved it!

Pretty deep. So sad... :(

D_P

I know someone who went threw a simaler situation... some of my best friends, This poem really speaks threw to me, 5/5

A vicious cycle. good poem