Why?

by ~Not~Quite~There~   Jan 31, 2007


Why is it there is no one there when you are crying?
Why is it there is no one there when you are dying?
When you just want someone to care that you are breathing
And to ask hey how come you're leaving?
And why no one wants to know
Why your confidence is at an all time low
What is even the point in living?
When all your life you've been giving
And no one gives back they just all receive
And you have no body to make you believe
That you can succeed.
Why is it there is no one there when you are crying?
Why is it there is no one there when you are dying?
So why even bother struggling to exist
When you know
No one will ever answer this.

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  • Nice poem really like it...there is always a point in living and you will find that at some point even though it may be awhile sometimes i question it my self your not alone...good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tyler

    That was a beautiful poem, not quite their, keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Not~Quite~There~

    Thank you :)

  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    Aawwhhh, That is one of the best poems. I love the rhymes and what you say is so reall and deep,Oh my, this blew me away.