Comments : The Little Things You Do

  • 15 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    Sweet Mother Sisco! Your work just keeps getting more amazing everytime! You are an absolutely AWESOME writer and with every single poem I read, I get blown away. I really wish that I shared the same talent, but reading your work always makes me smile. Lots of Loveee

  • 15 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Hey this is so nice i really like it i gotta add you to my favorite if i already dont have you on there so yea read some of my stuff and add me to yours if you like them! Love always

    Monica aka Mika

  • 15 years ago

    by *Ill Never Let Go*

    Dude im likein your soul put to pen and paper, im looking forward to readin more of your work

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Wow ur so creative and unique with ur words. i keep checking from time to time to c if uve posted any new poems, and im rapt that i found one today. this was great a very heartfelt poem!! loved it!! keep it up. xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful poem of love that you have written. Excellent job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ceci

    Wow.you are a very interesting and great poet!.i love this poem and i am sorry not to have commented on it sooner.for i thank you for your generous comment on mine.
    thank you.and keep on going!you are truly great.

  • 15 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    There is a lot of emotion in your work and that is a lot - because good poetry is supposed to do just that.

    This piece is evidently straight from the heart - my only suggestion is that you try to work on the structure a little more - like maybe split it into more lines, so the flow remains strong.

    that is just my suggestion, because as a poet, you are the best judge of whether you want to go about it.

    "I no longer have to question the how or why, for the answer always comes back to you"

    I think this line is really wonderful - exactly the way true love should be.

    great going! and thanks for your comments on my work!

    peace
    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    *,,Great poem. Excellent rhyming and flow. Very heartfelt and sweet.
    "The little things about you have filled my hearts every desire
    You brought the key, and set me free; raised the bar of love, it couldnt go any higher"
    ^^ I loved those lines the most. 5/5
    Keep it up && thanks for the comment,,*

  • 15 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Good job!!! your a good writer!
    amanda

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Spectacular.
    I could feel that this poem and the feelings came straight from your heart. Everything flowed beautifully and it was overall wonderful.

    The confidence you give me when you hold my hand, the way you look at me and understand
    That Im lost without you by my side, theres no longer a need to run and hide

    ^ My favorite lines. Simply because that's how I feel every day of my life, too.
    You're a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. 5/5 Keep it up.

    Stephanie Lynn

  • 15 years ago

    by andy

    Very well done, amazing peice of work. keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by AShatteredDream

    Wow.. amazing!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's so nicely witten. I really enjoyed reading this. You're a very good poet. Keep on writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tessa

    Very Very Amazing Poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Troubled Dreams

    Loved this poem, great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow the words were powerful I loved it so much! excellent work 5/5
    *kaila*

  • 15 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. This is beautiful.
    I love it.
    5/5

    N-G-C-S

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow your passion flowed flawlessly into this peace... outstanding5>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 15 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh, this was beautiful!
    The imagery was breathtaking and the wording was a pleasure to read, as was the whole poem.
    I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and thought you did a wonderful job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is amazing. There's a slightly off beat rhythm once or twice that breaks the flow, but other than that it's wonderful. Nice job