Sweet Mother Sisco! Your work just keeps getting more amazing everytime! You are an absolutely AWESOME writer and with every single poem I read, I get blown away. I really wish that I shared the same talent, but reading your work always makes me smile. Lots of Loveee
Wow ur so creative and unique with ur words. i keep checking from time to time to c if uve posted any new poems, and im rapt that i found one today. this was great a very heartfelt poem!! loved it!! keep it up. xx
Wow.you are a very interesting and great poet!.i love this poem and i am sorry not to have commented on it sooner.for i thank you for your generous comment on mine.
thank you.and keep on going!you are truly great.
17 years ago
by shobhana kumar
There is a lot of emotion in your work and that is a lot - because good poetry is supposed to do just that.
This piece is evidently straight from the heart - my only suggestion is that you try to work on the structure a little more - like maybe split it into more lines, so the flow remains strong.
that is just my suggestion, because as a poet, you are the best judge of whether you want to go about it.
"I no longer have to question the how or why, for the answer always comes back to you"
I think this line is really wonderful - exactly the way true love should be.
great going! and thanks for your comments on my work!
*,,Great poem. Excellent rhyming and flow. Very heartfelt and sweet.
"The little things about you have filled my hearts every desire
You brought the key, and set me free; raised the bar of love, it couldnt go any higher"
^^ I loved those lines the most. 5/5
Keep it up && thanks for the comment,,*