Comments : London my mistress

  • 17 years ago

    by Sea2Summit

    At times painful yet rewarding to be so deeply in touch with your creativity. Yer gud.

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Thank you for the comment i thought i would return the favour lol. I read through your poems and thought this was really individual i really like it. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite creative expecially the first lines. I found the use of "london bridge" to be effective and really interesting. Overall the flow was good and this was a great read. Well done, ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. It was different. The flow seemed to be a little off. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Great poem!!..keep it up!...loved the deepness and emotion in it!...never stop writing!
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I liked the decsription in this poem, but I think there was so much too it that it kinda hindered the main message of the poem. Your vocabulary is well done too and the flow was good Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, so powerful! Choice of words is superb and imagery is very vivid.
    my favorite stanza is:
    "Its like this London character
    scares me with her darkness
    But deep down I am just like her
    and resisting her is pointless"
    ^ Excellently written lines.
    Great job on this one, keep up!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    It was pretty imaginative. I really liked the choice of words and the flow through it.

    I liked each lines and the use of the song fits perfectly. Another good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    O.O I'm WOW'ed. Seriously, A very well-written dark poem. Though the rhyming may hae been a bit choppy here and there, It was just...Fantastic. 5/5 Well done!

    Happy writing,
    Hannah-