That Dream.

by Krzysztof J   Feb 3, 2007


The wind was cold,
And i was bare,
The rain was falling,
As i stood there.

The cliff was high,
As i looked down,
And saw the waves,
Trying to tear it down.

The lightning cracked,
Just overhead,
The moon was hiding,
The night was dead.

The ocean called,
The wind did too,
'Just one more step,
You'll be home soon'.

The was a whisper,
There in the air,
A lil voice,
I did know well.

'You saved me once,
I'm here with you,
My soul is happy,
Because of you'.

She shed a tear,
And called my name,
Thats all it took,
There in the rain.

I woke up drenched,
I smelled of salt,
It was just a dream,
But her voice was not.

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    by Polly

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    by kiara

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