Average

by King Of Contradiction   Feb 3, 2007


Hi, I'm just a boy about 16,
Ive been to places you've probably never been.
You think I'm lucky? Id say your wrong.
I'm not average, not specially drawn.
you may think that my life is swell,
but my life is misery, my life is hell.
I never sleep, but I'm never awake
I lie in bed, wondering when Dawn will break.
I'm not average, I'm not like you,
I'm not special, i have nothing to do.
I'm not average, I'm just misread
I'm nothing special, I'm better off dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great work! i loved how it kinda built off of eachother and the end was like "BAM!!!" haha i loved it! keep up the great work! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by Aure

    A slow start but woow I just love the ending, you saved all up all your emotion and let it come down at the end like a bomb, great work of what's to become a great poet without doubt

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    The last 4 lines are my favorites.
    what a wonderfully penned poem.
    you are a very talented writer!!! keep it up!
    kat-x-

  • 17 years ago

    by KiSsEs~N~HuGs

    WOW.... that was good 5/5