The Thief

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Feb 4, 2007


The Thief lives alone, secluded from all mankind
Hidden for a reason unknown, a dark secret so confined.
Except for once every year, the Thief has never been known to appear.

Tonight is the night, the Thief will return, but only to fight,
Hellbound and desructive, without a remant soul,
Is this the truth, these stories we're told?
Explain how something like this could be..
For it seems just a little to f''cked up to believe.
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ACROSTIC POEM
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This poem is about all the lies we are told as 'youngsters' abd how our parents lie to us to keep us in line. it could also be inthe view of being told about a predator(like an online) and the person doesnt believe it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was good but I think the ending could have been abit more stronger if you would have used a more imaginative wording but it was good none the less Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    This was very creative. I liked the wording. It wasn't my favorite from you.. But it was still really good. Flowed really well & I love this form of poetry :]

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    You took a good subject to write about! really well said! i think that this poem is sooo true, there are sooo many lies just to get us out of trouble, yet sometimes it does nt work i gues...:P
    keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Hm.. this is a very differnt poem then what I was expecting. I like the words and ect, the only critism that I have is that I didn't really get a message out of it like I typically do in all of your other stuff, this one just seemed to me like a story of a man that you started with no ending.

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