This was very good, i enjoyed this poem, it was rather vivid and depicted my dreams as well.

It sounds like this is more of a nightmare than a dream? Maybe it's just the way I interpreted it? Nontheless, it was a great poem/ 5.5

OH MY GOSH! i love this poem.. amazing word choice.. great flow and good imagery.. spectacular write!

Great job. i really like this poem. i love the way it turned out. one thing though. in the 4th line of the first stanza, there should be a comma after only.

but great job. DEFINITALLY an amazing! poem!

Beatiful write.. great word choice.. and flawless flow.. a very enjoyable read.. nice work

I hav to agree with all of them!
but ya, this really feels like one of my beautiful nightmares, write more!
luv gabriella

Fantastic!!
Wow, I'm speechless, for once. Lol.
That was purely fantastic. Your wording was perfect, you can't improve at all with this poem. You've got a lot of talent, keep it up!! =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Awsome poem...this would b kool in the dark section....but it sorta makes me have the chills owells a 5/5 for me =)

Oh this is a great poem. i know that this is awesome. this is wonderful

excellent 5/5 David

I thought this was beautifully written.
The imagery and wording were such a pleasure to read.
I thought the whole piece flowed well and you did a wonderful job.

Omg i loved this such strong emotion nice job!!

Love it. It reminds me of my dreams as well.
"Creating images of fairytale lands
Though, deep inside I see untrue"
Very TRue

I think this is my favorite poem out of all that i have read, again very good wording... your writing style is different from so many people keep it up!

Gorgeous.
"Creating images of fairytale lands"
That line was so powerful and touching. I really enjoyed reading a poem of such beauty. I have enjoyed reading alot of your poems look forward to seeing more by you. ~mel

I think a very good definition of dreams
it is so amazing im going to add this to my favorites.