by Jenni Feb 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Crush the pain that burns inside, |
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Very strong poem i really like it 5/5 |
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The flow is a little off, but an amazing poem! i really liked it. wel done hun. |
by Delie
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Yes well portrayed... |
by S.L.T.T.E.
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Awesome poem! Extremly impressive for a 13 yr old. you get a 5/5. I'm adding you to my favorites list |
by Mousie
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Wow you have a great talent, wonderful job, great flow and wording 5/5 |