Loveyouu

by Dee   Feb 4, 2007


You told me that you loved me,
those words sound so surreal..
I believed you, not from words,
But its the way you made me feel.

The way you held me close
while you kissed my lips so lightly
You made my knees grow weak
and how you held me tightly.

The fire in my eyes
when I sought your perfect face ..
burned like the blazing sun ..
my whole world just seemed in place.

rough draft... not finished yet

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  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Very good start !

    I can't wait to read the rest of it.. Can you please tell me when you've finished it? :)

    Anyway.. Take care and good luck.. :)