Hello
am i glad to see a new poem by u....
by god, i was so happpy and when i read it i was far happier,,...
its an excellent poem with a touch of reality...
everyone can erlate to it...its so sweet and i guess in ur cass kind of disapointing for it hurts more when u know u can't see that person only the imagination of ur mind, but then just like u said that person will always be close to u because she lives in ur thoughts...
wanderful poem..
i truely loved it
god bless

Wow Goran, I loved it. The flow as well as the structure was good. The story told was great. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Wow Goran, i love this poem, great thinking behind it and i can relate to this poem alot. you are the greatest poet.

Awww this one is soooo cute 5/5

Aww this is cute I really liked it your a great poet keep it up!

Awww! yay i can finally see the poems again they fixed it!! lol... wonderful job as always, 5/5 what else??? i have some new ones check them out!

I know how you feel seeing the person you love everywhere you turn around nice job

Aww this one was so sweet hun! well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

VEry nice, I love it this is deffinateally a 5/5 great flow to it, I love the meaning, awesome poem!

Lol cute. It stinks when you just can't get someone out of your head, huh?

Just nitpicky thing. You changed verb tenses in the 3rd stanza. Watch that.

Overall very nice.

Awww!! i like how u add the classes and then end with psychology at the end. that's awesome. great idea. 5/5

That was amazing!..i really loved it!..so great...5/5 definitly from me....can you maybe comment some of my other poems? thanks!

Aww this is so nice. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Ur a really good writter. Wonderful. 5/5 Keep up the good work =)

~*~Missunderstood tears~*~

Great poem.
Your a good writer.
5/5

~Chelsea

Wow. took me a little bit to find one i havent commented. Nowadays, whatever I do
My eyes always see you.
In my Art class we had to do a self-portrait,
But i draw you.--DREW

and then in the last line, scare doesn't sound right.

and i was wondering if you could help me title a poem. i have it in the contest section. its called title contest--original i know!

<3 best of wishes. im off to read more!