A Cross

by Ray the emo i am   Feb 6, 2007


The darkness of it
Sends chill's down my back
The sharp tips of it
Is covered with blood
The chain it is on
Is cold hard metallic
I should hate it
Scared of it
But on you it drives me closer to it
I get close enough to feel it on my chest
As it cut's my chest
I should turn back
But I keep taking more
I should walk away
But I'm To deep into it now
It works deeper into me
Feeling it slowly in my body
I scream in pain
I need more
It comes out as my head is tilted back
Death Came and took me away
The cross consumed me
A cross.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    Hey good poem
    i liked it
    keep up the good work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Wow...gr8 poem..awesome!!!..keep up the gr8 work...never stop writing:D
    tk care brree

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray the emo i am

    Hey people just telling you all This Poem "A Cross" HAS BEEN PUBLISHED!!!! it has made it in the coffee table book "Forever Spoken" on the first page of poems!!! its awsome thanx for the people who gave me the support to sudmitt it (elena) it means a lot Bye people talk to you laters!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    Very nice imagery. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    That was good..!! 5/5

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