Illusion

by David   Feb 11, 2007


It is raining down pain
Thunder storms of sorrow
Rumbles of hurt from today
Then the quiet ending, but
Will there be a tomorrow?

Heartbeats of confusion
And life times of unknowing
Is life a secret distant land?
A place I call the :illusion:?
Yet no one will give me the chance

So I be a shadow all day
And silent by night
Not to arouse suspicion
I hurt now, you were right
You were my obsession.

I am soaked through
To the inner core
I wish I could have the power
To be strong, turn the clocks back
That one fateful hour.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This is a great poem with great meaning.
    You write really good poems,
    and i'll always comment back.
    5/5
    -Kelsey

  • 18 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I think that is a secret wish we all harbor, to be able to turn the clock back, and do something over, but if we do, then all the things we have now, all the lessons we've learned, go away... the poem was amazing as usual David.. you are such a wonderful poet!! All your poems have such a meaning, great job... 5/5 my friend
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 18 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow, i love the choice of words. awsum poem

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow..this was really good one of my favorite poems from you for sure! nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    First line, third stanza, where it says I be... I think it's supposed to be.. something else lol. sorry I just woke up. But overall I thought it was very well written. 5/5

    marcella

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