The Little Girl

by HidingThePainInMe   Feb 13, 2007


At four years old
And much too young
She lost her life
Which had barely begun.

The clock struck twelve
As she cried in the night
He'll soon be here
To say his "goodnights"

He opens the door
With that look in his eye
She knows what he wants
But she doesn't know why.

Her mother died
So long ago
She's all alone
With nowhere to go.

She screams and she pleads
For him to please let her go
But he plays "DADDY DAYCARE"
And just goes on with the show.

His games continued
For six more years
His nightly charades
Always left her in tears.

At ten years old
The Little Girl died
Ascending to heaven
She's finally alive.

PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE. IT MEANS A LOT TO KNOW HOW IM DOING AND WHERE I CAN IMPROVE. *thanx!*

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  • 16 years ago

    by miranda

    Ur poem is soo emotional.....it tells a story...which makes it come alive......its truly deep.......the beginning starts it off wonderfully...keep writing...ur a natural........beautifully worded.......

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    "At four years old
    And much too young
    She lost her life
    Which had barely begun."
    The beginning is so good, it really makes you want to read the rest of it. =) And the rest is good as well! Keep it up! xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Zoe

    I really liked this...it had a lot of emotion and a sad story behind it all so definitely 5/5 keep it up
    x!x

  • 17 years ago

    by Zoe

    I really liked this...it had a lot of emotion and a sad story behind it all so definitely 5/5 keep it up
    x!x