Not To Arouse Suspicion {Terzanelle}

It's a good poem, the flow has a little problem getting through, but overall it's really good.

Wow, another great poem. My only thought is that the flow could use a little improvement. But congrats on the unique idea. 4 stars =D

I really liked this. It flowed really well. The repitition really brought the poem together. Everything was .. flawless.

I liked how we could ''guess'' some of the words. That really captivated me :]

Beautifully penned.

Bri x

I'm not familiar with this style, but I thought you did a wonderful job with this.
I'm not sure if the repetition is part of the style? But I liked it, I thought it got your point across very nicely.
I thought the flow was flawless, and that ending was just perfect.

You have a decent rhetorical device operating, here with the 'not to arouse suspision' that repeats throughout - you could show a touch more venomn in this poem.

By the way thanks for you comment on my 'twats with baseball caps' poem. It was a polemic on how we the Brits only take things that are bad from your country - we as a nation are idiots. I wasn't knocking your country. Now go back and read it again within this context.