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This was kinda short...yet every word held beautiful and deep emotion.very sweet write...loved it!
xxPoojaxx

So sweet. A valenties dat poem. the word choice was great the emtion heartfelt. i don't what to say except great job 5/5

Okay for starters I can relate to this poem and I really like it and I thought you did a good job. But...the flow of the stanza was a bit off and I didn't really understand the structure overall good poem though

Awh, thats really sweet hunn. It had some nice emotions in there and the descriptions were good. But the flow was a little off. Try and not cut sentences in half by turning them into differnet lines. This ruined the flow of the poem a bit. Other than that, nice job. 4/5

Honestly I thought the format and rythm was off. You might have been trying to create an effect, but it sounded a bit ridgedy to me.
Other than that thought I really enjoyed it. I think you did a wonderful job at portraying an emotion as strong as love. I especially liked the lines,
"I can't stand being away from you, I
Never want this
To end."
Mainly because I think I can relate to them myself.

Overall I think you did a very Good job on this, keep it up*