Slit A Wrist (Alternate Ending)

by Sandra D   Dec 15, 2007


Slit a wrist
Start to cry
Call your friends
And say goodbye

Slit a wrist
Watch it bleed
It's all you want
And all you need

Slit a wrist
With that knife
You deeply want
To end you life

Slit a wrist
Realize
All your faults
And useless tries

Slit a wrist
Leave a note
Covered in blood
And no more hope

Slit a wrist
With that blade
One last time
Then start to fade

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  • 16 years ago

    by IsisLyubov

    Itz crazy but really gud =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great poem. I don't think I've mentioned it yet, but I really don't like cutting poems. But for some reason, all your poems are great. Even if they're about cutting they still grab my attention. Great write... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Really Good- Can Relate 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    THIS IS REALLY GOOD,
    I FEEL LIKE THIS:(

  • 16 years ago

    by rrrrrrr

    VERY deep. If this is about you, I'm sorry you feel this way. Life gets better. I like the short stanzas.

    The whole write was amazing, keep it up. :)
    5/5!
    Check out some of mine, thanks.