I'm Done...

by justin   Feb 15, 2007


I'm done with this crap,

done with this ruse.

I'm done with this trap,

so full of bad news.

I'm done with excuses,

done with the lies.

I'm done with these fools

who bear false ties.

I'm done with this setup.

I'm hanging my noose.

I'm done being a "screw-up"

because of you.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    the ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It could flow better but it's quite good. I really like the way the emotions come out. Loved the word choice though. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Zoe

    Wow this was really good...it was full of strong emotions and the ending really tied it all together definitely 5/5 keep it up!
    x!x

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Wow, this was so succint yet so daunting and twisted. the ending was just amazing with strong impact.