You Could Try

by Chelsea R.   Apr 5, 2004


You could try to help me
but my worlds so cold
You could try to fix me
take away the depression
but I'm already too lost and alone
there's no hope for me now
just sick of holding on
So You could try to save me
but the damage is done
I'm slipping further
deeper into the darkness
no one can hear my cries for help now
You could try to make me all better
but the truth is
I've already given up on myself

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  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsea R.

    Thnx again Kendra:0) Sorry to hear about ur problems with your friend!

  • 20 years ago

    by Kendra

    great poem.. i myslef have felt this way and curently do because of my one friend who has left me and my family problems, there is one person who wants to help but she cant now..

    ill be fine great work keep it up!

    ~kendra