Beautiful way you have professed your love, almost get the feel you are spreading your arms wide and shouting it all out to the skies!

I liked the rhyme scheme keep up the good work

Gary
Excellent!

Very beautiful and soooo romantic! A joy to read. 5/5 Debbie

I agree with all very beautuful, and romantic, is shows so much lov and passion, real poetry lies in ur heart which is where this poem came from. 5/5 keep writtin and take care xx
if you get the chance could you check mine out please would appreciate it. xx

Superb

Your words bring out the intensity of the emotions excellently. someones very lucky.

Absolutely beautiful Gary!
I enjoy your style so much. You are one of my favorites.
Take care!

Wow! I like it!
Keep up!
5/5

Ohh I love this... it's brilliant and very beautiful... You did a great job at capturing what it's like to be in love with someone who means everything. Keep writing, you are definitely one of my favorite poets on this site.

Very nice.

i have a weakness for a crescendo.

the emotion builds in this poem.

taking the reader with you.

very nice indeed.

Let not go further, this is a best poem!

This is a gr8 poem wot cani say m lost for words...tis funny how we poets can say that lol
though i do not call myself a poet ahah....
well i enjoyed this one very uch....it holds you all the way through!

tk care

Wow! This poem is beautiful as well! Enjoyed reading. It's heart touching... Love it, love it, love it!

Simply put,
this was beautiful. In every single way.

I want to love over and over again with this.