Saved*Mandz

by Mandz and Aly   Feb 18, 2007


In the arms of my baby
He's the one who saved me

My dreams, he is the witness
Witnessing this insane mess

Solutiion to problem, Problem to solution
Is this going to be a very sad conclusion

No solution to this problem, its only a haze
What did I do to be sent through this great maze

He gets to sit and watch me die within my dream
He hears the story, this isn't what it seems

My heart had its last beat
In this world I lost my seat

Miracle is what to come
I have survived that stupid gun

Given the heartbeat of my baby
This is how he saved me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    There is some grammer mistakes you could fix.
    My dreams, he is the witness
    Witnessing this insane mess.
    that line really stuck out to me! this was a very well to put together poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The words you use are so unique. they are trully perfect. they make this poem so fun to read. well done!

    5/5 david