I really liked the topic you wrote about! I thought it was very good. I loved your use of words. The rhyming was a little off, but it didn't really bother me. The flow was really good. I really liked the description you used they painted a picture. You did a lovely job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Wow this was a beautiful poem i really enjoyed reading it u did a very good job writing it u think you have a lot of talent keep it up 5/5

Nice job capturing the idea of memories.

the only problems i found with it are your tenses in the first stanza, and i think you may need to insert a word.

"Thoughts why you lost your only dad."
Thoughts OF why you lost your only dad.

Hope I'm not sounding harsh, but it seemed like the comments you wanted are those who tell you how to better the poem. i'm just doing what was asked.

i enjoy the poems. keep up the work.