Take Me Away [Acrostic]

by aDORKable x3   Feb 18, 2007


Take me away to a far off place
Alone, right now, without your embrace
Keeping to myself, it hurts so much
Ever longing for your touch

Mystified just by the thought of you
Exhausting all options, even though they're few

Always hoping that you'll come to me
Wishing that maybe one day you'll see
Angels and demons will no longer haunt
You are baby, the only one I want

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    LOVED it. i expecially loved:

    Angels and demons will no longer haunt
    You are baby, the only one I want
    that was such a great ending! and i absolutely love it. excellent job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loooove this so much.
    Well you obviously already knew that or I wouldn't have iven you first place haha.
    Seriously though, I think you did an amazing job with this, the wording is beautiful, the flow flawless, and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is so beautiful ciao, i love acrostic poems and this one is perfect, as always i give it a 5/5!!! keep writing babe!!! miss yall at the club!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Wow thats beautiful! my favorite line :

    Keeping to myself, it hurts so much
    Ever longing for your touch

    so true! ^^^ love it, keep writing!

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