Till Death Do Us Part [Tanka]

by Tammie   Feb 21, 2007


Love expressed deeply
On a special occasion
Of such devotion
Promising a partnership
As said; 'Till death do us part.'

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Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Hmm...
    It's weird.
    50% of people in the US break that promise.
    They get divorced.

    So I liked how you wrote a poem about it
    And bolded the fact that once you make a promise, you keep it.

    5/5 :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I think this was really cute, and you did a good job at wording it really well hun. Very nice poem. I enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Great poem, short but to the point

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I learned something neww, gr8 poem,, janaynay

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I loved it tammie. and that the way love is, till death do us part.

    5/5 always David

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