Saving Innocence.

by Tammie   Jun 2, 2009


Smile shaped like a teardrop,
Words don't say enough in situations
Where lie is just a part of believing.

Change of pace explains mood swings,
Words remain the same with stinging insinuations
Stabbing backs of harmless jokers.

Faint stutter in actions forbidden,
Not quite enough to stall destiny,
To save innocence until tomorrow.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    I like the very last line of this poem the best. I'm not entirely sure what you're going for here, I mean, I have my theories, but it's not too clear. Which can be great, because it makes me think ^_^
    It looks to me like this needs to be proof read (and so do half of my poems XD) sometimes you need someone else to notice things like that.
    For instance, I believe that 'where lie' should be 'where the lie(s)' or 'where lying'
    I dunno!
    This is a good concept for a write though ^_^