Oh my God. I can't even explain how beautiful this poem is to me. It speaks out so loud to my heart...and its just...AHHHH amazing. Melissa your poetry is so spectacularly good.

Melissa, this is just perfect. Your poetry always leaves me breathless and wanting to read more. It's so introspective and thought provoking.

This poece was absolutely astounding. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull write!!

I love this poem! The line "quietly you left,unbearably loud you're gone" is my favorite and has a personal meaning to me as well. Look forward to reading more.

Oh gawd, i can relate to so much of this...it sucks lol. thanks
Carissa EE>

A beautiful yet sad poem to a lover. Well done, Melissa

What a brilliant poem. I like the style you write in - its nice to read different pieces that aren't all organised into their perfect little stanzas...

Bravo!!!

Superb mournful piece with perfect expression of feelings and desires. The poem flows very well and its just flawless. 5/5 ofcox
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Very stron feelings.. you talent reflects in this poem. thats why i am giving you 5/5

flow of words was also nice.

Really wonderful

Hi...... nice workdone

Nice job....

I love this one. Great job. =] And thanks for the comment.

You have a great gift of capturing the essence of your feelings and like a painter splashing the words like colours on a canvas. Thank you, a real treat to read your work.

The imagery in this poem is superb. I love it. a lot:)
haha, keep up the good work!
5/5

Awesome write! Very descriptive, it kept my imagination alive. Good job on writing a unique piece. 5/5

Jeezus safe my soul...WOW!