You write a lot kid
but your words get better n better
i loved it..
just like you've seen me go through a lot of girls
ive seen u go through guys.
and this one seems really good

Another great write. Keep it up.

Really great, I loved the feeling it shoves in my head.
Brilliant.
Keep it up, I hope to read more stuff like that.

Cheers,
GA

PS: If you get a chance please read some of my stuff.

I really enjoyed reading your poem. You have so thoroughly captured the way it feels to be in love.

Great poem 5/5 you should come check mine out sometime

Amazing poem. Your words speak out to me so beautifully, it was excellent, I especially loved the first stanza. Your writes never get worn out and are never too cliche, they are just perfect for any situation. Keep it up girl!!! xxx

That was a really nice poem, and it flowed with happiness. Well done

Holy. That was brilliant. I must admit that the first stanza kind of dissapointed me, but I read on, and found that the flow was excellent, and the emotion ended up very good. A lovely poem.

I loved is the best

Everyday I'll tell you
how much you mean
to me,
wipe away your tears,
kiss you cheek,

awwwwwwwwwww this is the true love.. and you realy knowwhat is love menaing. you done very well. i wish someone sed me these things anyways take care.. i realy loved your poem......