Living With A Heart, Broken

by aDORKable x3   Feb 21, 2007


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I regret my mistake more and more each day
For all those words I never got to say
You left too soon and my words, unspoken
Leave my heart feeling so bruised and broken
Torn in two, my feelings left unsaid
Are constantly spinning around my head
They`re causing such a tremendous ache
Threatening to make my heart break
If you give me a chance to say what`s on my mind
Maybe then my tensions will finally unwind
You left me standing there, hurting for more
All our notes are locked away in my drawer

I still wonder how my life would be changed
If you were still here, would it all be rearranged
Would my plans run smoothly or fall to the gutter
I would scream the words that I could barely mutter
I Love You! I need you, with me, by my side
To help me dry up the tears that I cried
I`m sorry I never told you how much you meant to me
I just thought I had a little more time, don't you see
I never realized you'd be gone so fast
I still can't help it; looking into the past
You were my only, my reason to stand tall
You never pushed me down, you`d help me when I'd fall

You were the one who could make my day bright
Without you now, nothing seems right
I guess you never knew you meant all this to me
I love you so much, my Baby, you'll always be
But now you're gone, what can I do
Who's gonna be there for what life puts me through
Who's gonna be there when times get rough
Who's gonna be there when I need someone tough
Who's shoulder will I lean on when I need to cry
You're the only one I want; you're my guy
But now all my words will be forever left unspoken
Because I'm Living With A Heart, Broken

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, wonderfully emotional peice of poetry you wrote here, great Job. I loved it, but I must say, your stanzas are huge, you might want to break them up a little more. Other than that, the flow was great.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 5

    again... a great write... the flow is flawless... some of the rhymes seemed forced... but then there were many lines that had so much power.. my favorite was...
    "I would scream the words that I could barely mutter"
    wow.... it paints a picture ... spectacular

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. This poem especially spoke right to my heart. I loved the 2nd and last stanza's. It had such emotion hidden away and you just somehow bring that out amazingly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    You left too soon and my words, unspoken
    Leave my heart feeling so bruised and broken

    that line got me. absolutely perfect! 10/5 if thats possible.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I LOVED this!
    The emotion behind the wors are clear to see, and this is something I can relate to.
    The flow was flawless and the wording a pleasure to read.
    Excellent work.