You're my all

by blueknight   Feb 23, 2007


You're my all
by Mr_blueknight

You're the light of my lost soul
Stairway when angel falls
Dawn on my dark night
And Brain to control the ache

When words became a sharp sword
You're my faith as my only armor
A sweet melody of every song
Star on the cloudy dark space

A meadow on a water world
Sun beneath the depths of the snow
Answer to my million questions
A seed on the hottest wilderness

You're the color of my rainbow
The piece of my unsolved mystery
The only one that I can hold
My life in this vindictive world

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow i loved the description in this one with the sword, brain etc

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Gene!!! I'm so jealous of you and im also ashamed. Your poetry is amazing and unique why would you give it up =[ I miss you so much I hope we talk again some day
    xx Roxy Love you!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Grr.
    Haven't you noticed how my comments vanished into thin air? =[

    Anyway, I had reread this poem and tried to dig it somehow. This particular couplet, "When words became a sharp sword - You're my faith as my only armor", was rather remarkable. Words (regardless of its kinds) are precisely fatal, whereas the "subject" stands by you firmly--it kind of surprised me, yet delighted me at the same time for it is something I can correlate with. That's nice. This poem is nice. And she is nice! All right, I'll stop babbling now. I hope you'll get over this roadblock in writing soon. Can't wait to read your latest works!
    all the best and take care.
    Love,
    Debberrs

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Another master piece gene, its great to have u back, another 5/5!!! please dont stop writing, true talent is a gift to the few who have it!!!

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