by Tammie
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Hmm.. This is an interesting poem. I'm not sure how to comment it. It is unique, which I love about poetry, and this is a different side to you that I haven't seen before. You worded everything nicely, and used good vocab, it flowed well too. Another awesome poem. =] 5/5 |
by Kalee
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It was a great poem. very unique. in the last stanza the first its should be it. and in the third line you need to change it as it has gone the funny way it always does. |
by firexdancer
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5/5 this really flowed well, and was kinda calming, i lovd it, |
by Kaila
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Oh my gosh this poem is one of the best!! I liked it alot and it flowed so very nicely...great work keep it up |
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I love this poem, awesome feel to it |
by e LIZ a beth
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I absolutly LOVE! this poem. it was written so! well and you the way you described it was simply fantastic. it made me actually think about the beauty behind music :]! |
by Soraya Lowe
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LOVE IT! So pretty! I love music (if I didn't have it I would die)...so I can kind of identify with this poem. Great Job!!! |
by X2892
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Excellent poem!! i really got into this, made me remember how i use 2 feel like this, still u get a 5/5 |
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5/5 i love this poem 2! =] most excellent! totally relate 2 it! great work, |
by Kristina
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Wow. this is a very different kind of poem. i really enjoyed reading it. it flowed wonderfuly. great idea you had! 5/5 |
by Mousie
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Aww i love it, it's so true, i'm a music lover myself. beatiful poem 5/5 definitely |
by Jenni
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I had this really soft mellow tune in my head when I was reading this poem. you did a wonderful job on describing how so many people feel about music! |
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Awesome job! It really flows beautifully, and the rythmn is superb!! I love how you describe it, because I am a music lover. It really sings (no pun intended) the beauty in simple things. Thank you for the comment, and I think if you keep up this work, you'll end up on my favorites list. 5/5 as always!!! |
by Brigitte
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Wow, that was amazing. It was so uniquely written. Your wording was perfect on the scale of imagry. The only thing that didn't fit was that "melody" didn't seem to rhyme with "please" other than that, you have me interested to read from you. Nice job |
by Rachel RTVW
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Good imagery. Instead of painting a picture, it has you imagine a soft sweet melody. Music to my ears! Good job! |
by kiara
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Wow, i dont think i have read anything of yours quite like this i really love it |
by Sherry Lynn
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The best music one could hear is the pure song that their heart sings. |
by Ingrid
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You are my sweetheart, lol! And I love all of your poems. |
by Marcus blake
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I like this a lot and i'm a musician and we get depressed and happy so i can relate i dig this... |