Behind closed doors

by princesrainbow   Feb 25, 2007


Black surroundings
empty houses
how could this happen
in such a way
no one feels me
dont even see me

could it really happen
loosing patiance
over this thick door
shouting your name
each day feeling
down for not hearing me

doors are locked
on the darkest the day
of my life
restless is i feel all those
shouting worth of nothing

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  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I liked this poem, but fix the wording of the last stanza.

    and the contest? the who wants to be a judge thing. what now?

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The feeling of loneliness could be felt in the words you wrote, may you find peace and joy in your heart that you seek

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    That was good. Had a few spelling; punctuation mistakes though.

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