Pride!

This is cool.:) i can see why you called it pride. thats good, that you can have times when you fell you can do anything, rattle the stars. again it rhymes so go you. good job david.

Sweet!
you have pride! i knew you did lol
this is freaken me out how your so poetic and all, i always guessed there was more than the top layer

Pride can be a dangerouse thing; however, when used properly it can be the saving grace for someone. Always stand firm in your beliefs, but in return do not judge those who believe different then you. Instead respect them for standing true to themselves as well.

--Sher

Very powerful message here. Full of emotion. Forgive me for not r/r/c on any of your work sooner but I thought you were another David who also r/r/c my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry. I am glad you enjoyed them as I am enjoying yours. I look forward to reading the rest when I wake up as I work night shift and must go to sleep now........

Im BAK!!!! lol

this was great the flow the meaning just everything. it seems your getting way better than when you first started out :) snaps 4 you

and guess what i finally beated my writers block coz i just posted a new poem so yay me lol