Silence

Hmm, you always create great images, but it is hard to understand the point of the poem. Perhaps show how this is a portrayal of boredom at school? At least that is my interpretation.

Damn this poems sends a shock through you so well you just cant but read it twice

I love the style of your writting. I love small poems with tons of meaning. I think it's a harder task then going on forever, with useless repetition. And more than anything, I enjoy your use of vocab. amazing...
5/5

marcella

Wow. Incredible. Such little a poem means so very much. Very good job at attracting my attention, and awesome job at leaving me hanging wanting more... with such little before.

Inspiring, and i love your style and form.
5/5
~yellowfeverlime

Really well worded, great job