Fine, I will leave it here... I can't edit this poem now. Like many of my other poems. I know there are no spelling mistakes for a fact lol but, in the fourth stanza, last line it should be now not has. and there's comma where it shouldn't be and the places where there should. So besides those factors, I'd like to here your opinions. :]
This...was just perfect.
The imagery used was breathtaking, and I found this to be creative and original.
The first few lines had he hooked and the ending was so fitting.
You did a wonderful job with this.
Incredible, beautiful, and a wonderful write. Good title, Modest Rose. It is sensual yet... kind of indescribable. I love the flow, and it is just, imaginative and creative. I ttly love the line... ok, the verse lmfao:
*Her unique, subtle essence
Entwined within the breeze
Like an awakened dream
Kisses all with her tranquility
Wow, this was amazing, it was so beautiful, and it flowed perfectly, where did you get the idea for this? i would never of thought of writing a poem like that, it was gorgeous 5/5
For a rose cannot see...