Comments : The Modest Rose

  • 13 years ago

    by X2892

    Good poem well written but i think there were some spelling errors but itz still good other then that, 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brook

    Amazing. The way you write really speaks to the senses, and you can almost see the whole poem right before your eyes. Very well done. 5/5
    <3

  • 13 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this was really good. it's a very different type of poem. i've never seen one like it. so i give you tons of credits for that! it flowed really nicely. amazing job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 13 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Fine, I will leave it here... I can't edit this poem now. Like many of my other poems. I know there are no spelling mistakes for a fact lol but, in the fourth stanza, last line it should be now not has. and there's comma where it shouldn't be and the places where there should. So besides those factors, I'd like to here your opinions. :]

    ::TheFireInMyEyes::

    [marcella]

  • 13 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Hey Marcella, thankyou for the comment you left on my poem, much appreciated!
    This poem is really wonderfully written!
    Great use of personification!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this poem was amazing i loved it great job

  • 13 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow!! I really liked this. It was amazing. I love the personification in it & the imagery.. it was absolutley beautiful. It flowed really well & nothing seemed forced.

    Amazing job, Hun. Keep it up.

    Bri.x

  • 13 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    That was unbelievably beautiful!! That is deffinatly one of the best poems I've read. Keep up the awsome work!
    God bless 5/5!!

    Tay<3

  • 13 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    This is absolutely beautiful hun. so descriptive and emotional. i just love it. i can close my eyes and your words paint the entire picture. well done

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This...was just perfect.
    The imagery used was breathtaking, and I found this to be creative and original.
    The first few lines had he hooked and the ending was so fitting.
    You did a wonderful job with this.

  • 13 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    *nonpareil*

    peril????? i don't know of this word......

    Incredible, beautiful, and a wonderful write. Good title, Modest Rose. It is sensual yet... kind of indescribable. I love the flow, and it is just, imaginative and creative. I ttly love the line... ok, the verse lmfao:

    *Her unique, subtle essence
    Breathtaking, captivating,
    pleasant...
    Entwined within the breeze
    Like an awakened dream
    Kisses all with her tranquility
    *

    it's just so, peaceful....

    Wow, great write.
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 13 years ago

    by Allison

    Very, very lovely dear. You did a good job with the imagery. It was so descriptive and if flowed nicely. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 13 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Absolutely beautiful! Love the imagery! The repitition of lines at every other stanza really stands out. Perfect flow and rhythm. A joy to read....All the best Debbie 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. *sigh* it was beautiful the words were nice. your vocabulary beats mine by a bunch...haha. this poem was fabulous!!!!!! 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow. It was beautifully written. A very easy poem to appreciate and get into. Great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The beauty of the poem definately matches the beauty of a rose, I loved the way it was written, amazing job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I loved the way it flowed. It was muy beuatiful

  • 13 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow, this was amazing, it was so beautiful, and it flowed perfectly, where did you get the idea for this? i would never of thought of writing a poem like that, it was gorgeous 5/5
    gabriella
    For a rose cannot see...

  • 12 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Woah!! So awesome!! awesome word choice....the words lik flowed perfectly..im addin this to mi fav poems

  • 12 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow how descriptive is your poem. Amazing with the best word choice and metaphorical quality. I owe 5/5 dear. Tc