Leave

by beth   Mar 2, 2007


Door wide open
wanting freedom
cannot find a way to escape
just want to leave
and never come back

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    The feeling of being trapped. I have been there.

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I like the metaphoric speak of this. It leave the reader wondering. But it also leaves them a bit confused, because it doesnt lead one direction. If its open, you can leave, but you cant find an excape, and you want to leave, adn not come back, but you cant come back if you never left...I still liked it though.

    *4/5*

    [PygmyPuff]

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