Tears Don't Fall (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   Mar 2, 2007


Tears don't fall
Embedded they are
And no matter what
Rounds the corner
Somebody cares for you

Deciding whether it's true
Or not, is up to you
Nobody can tell you what to do
The reason I'm telling you all of this,

For the first time, I came to realize
All my life I was sad and down
Looking for an answer that didn't exist
Looking for someone to love, when really I was loved all along

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

*Written For a Contest*

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 16 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This really is a great write i like this poem alot and the message is so true and strong through out your poem,
    nice work,
    nessa

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    This was a really good poem. I love acrostic poetry. By the way what inspired you? Was it the Bullet For My Valentine song "Tears Don't Fall"? I don't know I'm just guessing

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Enjoyable read. The final stanza was perfect and concluded the poem well. Short but with meaning. Only suggestion is to correct spelling error weather=whether. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    When i looked at your list of poems, i was curious about this one, because the title remembered me of a song by bullet for my valentine...as i read the poem i was wonderfully surprised by seeing that with the same title, you managed to write a poem far much better than one of my fav. songs...

    but i guess the beauty of the poem can speak for itself...
    5/5

    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Faded

    I usually dont like acrostic poems, but this one is good, it has a clear message and hope you win the contest you wrote it for.

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