Daydreams.

by Kaitlin   Mar 3, 2007


I sit here.
Looking out the window.
There are trees. Sky. Leaves.
Then I seem to drift off.
Into a world.
Kind of like sleep.
Then there are people.
No better than me.
Flying. Fighting. And swimming in seas.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I would have one word changed. like sleep to light sleep.

    my hint to you is to be very descriptive. more. i know this is the start but you need to try different things.

    5/5 David

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